Monday, June 04, 2007

Karankey
Pruthvi- vayu-tej odhi
Chali jaaun tyare
Paandadu pan nahi haley
Koi akash ghoshna nahi
Ambar shithil
Samay nirantar, moongo, sakshi.
shant saumya
Sumsaam
Koi aakrosh nahi.
Koi vednaa nahi.
Na aagal ulaal na pachal haraal
Pachi jid kevi?
Maangvani, hatagrah ni maney tev nathi.
Munga modhey hasta rehvani tev chey.
Etleyj
Juvo, maru ek kaam karsho?
Vyakti- vishay- naam sarvaney
Smaran maathi bhoosi nakhjo
Halveythi.
Potanu dhyan rakhsho
Ema maaro jeev kyank khuney bandhayo hashey.


38 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well, this one even better....it has that punch in the end ... departing without a trace and yet getting that unobtrusive place in ones heart, mind, memories and existence....excellent!!!!

austere said...

tamey vakhaan vishaye khoob udaar cho!

Anonymous said...

For, enveloped in / Earth , air, fire / When I go, / Not a leaf will rustle. / No heavenly voice/ From the still skies. / Time, an eternal silent witness./ Calme, peaceful / Deserted. / No fury /No pain / No commotion. / After all why the stubbornness? / Demanding, adamancy never is my habit/ I keep smiling silently./ And so, / See will you do something for me? / The persona, the matter, the name /Erase everything from your memory, / Very gently./ Take care of yourself. / In that, my life would be bound / Somehow to some corner of your life..... ( A loose translation for the others)

Anonymous said...

They say imitation is the best form of flattery. I believe translation is the best form of praise

austere said...

that is very generous, shiv. thank you. very much.

Anonymous said...

Hope that this one was good enough. Had some difficulty with some words, esply vishay...

austere said...

Its done with a lot of heart, Shiv. Really nice. ty.

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Anonymous said...

Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now. Keep it up!
And according to this article, I totally agree with your opinion, but only this time! :)

Anonymous said...

I am not going to be original this time, so all I am going to say that your blog rocks, sad that I don't have suck a writing skills

austere said...

Anon- who are you? why would you leave an anon comment? Are you a spam bot or a ghost? Do you even understand the language this is written in?

Have the guts to sign in with your name or please don't comment.

Enough.

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austere said...

Since this is a personal account and NOT a forum, please do not put any poll here.

Why dont you go get your own page?

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Anonymous said...

hiya


just signed up and wanted to say hello while I read through the posts


hopefully this is just what im looking for looks like i have a lot to read.

austere said...

As long as you don't leave me spam, you're very welcome.

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